Sunday, March 27, 2011

Veins (Vampire Story)

Marvin Trotsky had seen everything there was to see as a coroner. Gunshots stab wounds, bruises, all inflicted on men women and children. The gory stuff never bothered him really, because after all, he had to cut the people open to examine. Usually, he had a personal sympathy for the ones who passed that made him a little sick to the stomach. But the body that was brought to him today changed everything.

The automatic site elicited a wince from him and had triggered a sudden heaving. Sickness rising up, he couldn’t make it to the waste bin and instead, spewed all over the floor, chunks of his breakfast and lunch floating amongst the ongoing currents of vomit. All he could think of was the detective words when the body was delivered. “This is some sick shit, sir, I’m not sure if even you could handle it,” he remembered along with the way he had chuckled off his warning. Oh how he wished he’d heeded it now, on the floor, in a puddle of his own puke. The body lay above him, a mesh of tissue and blood for a face and forearms chewed down to the blood stained bone. Whatever had killed him didn’t just murder him, no. They had ripped parts of him to shreds with their bare teeth.

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“Come on, come on,” Jessica impatiently tapped her wrist forcefully, waiting for a good vein to surface. When she finally found one, she took her needle straight to it, injecting the contents of the syringe into it. An automatic relaxation hit her weary body and she leaned back on the concrete wall behind her, letting the heroin take its course. She had been homeless for several months now, and with prostitution being her only miserable way of income, dope was the only thing that kept her sane. “Shit” her friend Louis said next to her. Not only did they have the same job, but he was constantly harassed for being transsexual, this night, beaten up by a couple guys for it, and on top of it all, he couldn’t find a vein to shoot into. They both addressed their sovereign addiction in the dark for a few minutes in solitude until they caught something across the street.

A van pulled up, with three men and a woman getting out, all hauling large, long trash bags. Dressed in black clothes, they look almost as if they were residents to night itself. Shadows perfectly eclipsing their faces from the streetlights, the hauled the bags in, slamming the doors shut.

“Hey, Lois, what do you think are in the bags?” Jessica asked, calling Louis by his preferred name.”

“I don’t know, Jess, maybe bodies,” he said with a tone that she couldn’t perceive as sarcasm or conviction.

She took the bait, “Do you think they’re vampires?”

A small laugh from him, again indistinguishable in nature. Was this a pitiful laugh in disbelief of the question, or from bitterness of not getting high? Or a small giggle because maybe he had found his vein? “Aren’t they supposed to sparkle or something?”

“Not all of them”

He gave it some thought, “What would they want to do in a hellhole like this?”

She gave an eerie consideration, rising from the ground from the ground, “Maybe it’s the perfect front. Let’s go, “She said with a bit of fear of whatever was across the street causing her to shake a bit, “If I’m late, Dan’s going to kill me.”

-Derrick

Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Hey, we're actually doing this now, so...

Prompt 1: Write a vampire story with the least amount of cliche's possible

Post them here with the name:
Your Title (Vampire Prompt)

-Derrick

Wednesday, March 4, 2009

Chaos Quickly Ensued…

Julius Evgeny was once known as an urban legend had been hiding in his house for about a year now

Malnourished his face had caved in his body bone dry and his bones dilapidated, he realized that there was no getting out of this

He was going to stay immortal forever

He rose up in bed to see the cared remains of his house. The standing structure was black, filled with ash and soot, but the floors were no longer there

Julius tiptoed over the wooden beams and then holding one of the beams, dropped downstairs (because the stairs had burned down too) and he left the house

The reason his house was burnt down was that before he went to sleep, he dropped a match in an attempt to end his life. When he woke up, his skin was fully healed, he was malnourished, but his skin was fine

As he stepped outside, he realized that he hadn't seen the sun for so long, which caused his eyes to go into a constant squint. As he walked, his footprints indented the ground

When he inhaled, he took everybody's breath away

When he cried, his tears burnt through everything it splashed against

He used to be a hypochondriac until he met a man named Ryland who offered him immortality. Julius gladly took it but it came with a cost

Once known as an urban legend, Julius now was on the Nation's most wanted list for causing death everywhere he stepped.

Behind him, cars crashed, hearts failed, and flowers went limp and all he could do was close his eyes

From a distance, some kids playing hopscotch spotted him and screamed. They went upstairs to tell their parents, just as they'd been instructed to do.

Thirty seconds into walking and the first moment happened.

A lady who lived on at least the 6th floor of an apartment was watering her plants in a flowerbox when she slipped and fell through the window.

The hard thump of her body made Julius cringe

He looked up in the sky to distract himself and saw an airplane flying

It took a sudden nosedive and began to depart from the sky

And that's when the military came in

As soon as Julius Evgeny singed that contract, Ryland died and misfortune followed him everywhere he went.

Military standard tanks came, blocking roads; the most cutting edge weapons were brought out of the arsenal as they all began to fire at their target: a bone dry 17-year old with drooping eyes and a miserable frown on his face

They had to take him down before he caused any more destruction.

They hit him with bullets, grenades, rockets and explosives

But nothing would happen to this person who just kept walking

It had been fifty years now and nothing much about his feelings had changed

He just wanted to be gone

Behind him, hydrants blew up off their tops, electric lines snapped in half and sparked and buildings collapsed

His tears did nothing but burn the pavement

But after all this running all this fighting, watching building collapse on top of all the people who tried to harm him

Julius Evgeny finally reached clarity

He found a patch of flowers in the bark and lay on the small bed and they died of course

But the grass stood strong and sturdy

So he grabbed a handful of the green pulse of the earth, our oxygen supply, our foundation

And he said "I give you the gift of immortality "

Bullets sprayed into the chest of Julius and for the first time ever, he felt life slipping away. He smiled and simply rolled over into the glass.

His body turned to stone